Why I Choose This Paper

The reason I picked his paper to revise was because it was our first paper, and it only seemed write to go back to the original work. Another reason for picking this peace is because I hold his topic very near my heart. I am not Palestinian, but justice is something that I am a bigger supporter of, something I believe the Palestinian’s are getting the short end of. This paper was written before the elections, and now we have a new president, Obama. Only time will tell what changes he brings, but I still believe that if he is to follow his old policies, and not handled well, this conflict is going to get out of hand and out of control.
The changes I made to the paper were ones that the Professor thought that I needed to add to the paper. I personally do believe that to get the full effect of the situation I could have even made a novel out of it, something I think about often. Talking about the fictiious life of a family living in such a place and weaving bits and peaces of history and how in that part of the world it does effect each and every individual. Apart from that I really hope that peace comes to this part of the world soon, because I have heard one too many stories about families such as the one described, who don’t know if they are going to have their loved ones with them the next day, let alone their homes. It’s a tough life, I know I can’t relate to it too well, but I do want to do something about it.